The Book – 2nd Draft

This is my second draft of ‘The Book’ where I have applied the changes I  conducted from my quantitative research. I do not believe this is completed yet and there could be some more variations to be made and tried, however I do believe we are very close. One thing that I have noticed from asking my peers and other members in my group is that we need more titles and the music needs to be realigned to ensure we have a silent suspenseful ending.

From here I will make new changes and try out different variations of new titles and music. I currently believe that the audio needs more work than the actual cinematography, however I am going to remove the video noise (grainy footage) to make it look cleaner and less distracting.


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